this novel is fucking awesome, Im really glad we dont just jump in the sex or romance, there is nothing wrong with that approach but sometimes its nice to read a slow burn novel, I also love the worldbuilding of this game, its like the world matters to you just as much as the characters and I really like the magic, question: do u have any idea how long this is gonna be? I hope its very long. The only "complaint" I have is that we only see the mc once, kinda wish we could see his face and his kinda sexy body more often lol
It is pretty new so not yet kinda there is like one kinda like that but not really since I have heard him state before that romance and that stuff will be in later patches right now it is just the amazing story also sorry for answering for you gigasaddle just wanted to get you some more time to work on 4.0 or whatever will be next
Like I said. I downloaded new version but in game is still 0.2.2 and even in file it is writen 0.2.2. I will try like uninstal and try instal again. Mayby this will work, but i will wait for your reply.
First off, all of the characters are lovable, especially Jymsar, I wish there was more stuff with him.
Secondly... I think there's a lot of room to change all of the info dumps. When you first leave the town, the first time you see the background of that bright green hill, there's such a big info dump that it made me wanna skip, and a similar one when you meet Harren.
I finally got around to playing this update and I really enjoyed it, but when Jymsar joked about me sleeping like a princess, why couldn't I shoot back with with something like "If I'm a princess, does that make you my knight in shining armor?" or something like that? I hear the joke in my head every time I read or think about that interaction and it saddens me to think it's not actually in the game...
Seriously though, this was a really good update; it was great to start getting more information about the magic system and how magic works in the world. I'm really looking forward to seeing how future updates will build upon what we've learned so far.
Ok so this isn't much of a comment it is more of a question a dumb question but a question. I want to if I'm pronouncing Jymsar's name right is it Jim and Sar the way I have been saying it or no if I am saying it wrong please reply the correct pronunciation also I just finished 3.0 yesterday and I already want more it is great it is the first i have seen because I'm new to itch.io but can't wait for more.
If you go to Google Translate and type in 'Jymsar,' set the language to English, Spanish or Italian, click the text-to-speech button and you'll hear it say it about right.
Thanks and again great game can't wait I expect great things from this novel also love the characters, story, and pretty much everything about the novel keep doing your best I know I'm kinda being a suck up but I got to give complements to you.
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I know you said to not get too hyped... BUT DAMN!! this is way better than what I expected, Even when I was hyped! I expected character development, and I got them!
Jymsar became more interactive and made me laugh a few times, It was such a great update to him,And saying that I was OVERJOYED when alen got expressions is a MASSIVE understatement, Especially the part where he was worried about us XDDD
The part where we were learning magic was a great treat for me, And I actually tried the things alen was saying in real life and it was SOOOOO RELAXING, I don't mind that this update took so long, Because it was well WORTH IT!
over all this update is wonderfully amazing!
★★★★★ from me!
I'll be waiting for your next update and to see more of jymsar soon, But you can take as much time as you need! No point rushing a development of such a great game right?
And as I always say...
"Onwards to the future! To the stars and beyond! So that we might find our own perfect Happy ending~!"
The plan is to make an update every month. Last update was way off schedule.
So while I am aiming for monthly releases, I will fail to deliver sometimes.
The next one is going to be more of a housekeeping update though, at the end of August. Very unlikely to progress the story, as I want to focus on character graphics and reworking some assets.
Story is great so far and music and almost everything(rate 5 star btw) i think from next update you should begin to add romance and continue story together
Hi there! I really like your work so far, and I'll be looking forward to future updates! Since you asked for feedback on this new update, I have some comments I want to share. I hope you find them helpful!
Reamus' inner dialogue while he was trying to focus felt too abstract, especially during the second time when Alen and Jymsar left him alone. It was like... there were words that I was reading, but I couldn't find any concrete ideas to latch on. I didn't really know what Reamus was trying to describe most of the time. Unless that was the point? It was still kind of a slog to read through though. You did say that you plan to include more illustrations for this chapter. I'm not sure if that includes this specific part, but I think even a few black-and-white imagery or something would help flesh out Reamus' thoughts. If I could make a suggestion, maybe you could write his monologue to be a bit more poetic? Not in the sense that it's filled with rhymes and metaphors and all that, but more of that the words have a certain subtle rhythm to them. It'd fit the whole fluid, esoteric-y tone of the whole thing at least, and I think it'd be a fun read. It would be better than Reamus just... saying things.
I felt that Alen was a bit too quick to raise his voice at Reamus there. It's not that it goes against his character or anything, but it did feel like it suddenly came out of nowhere. The back-and-forth between the two could be a bit longer. I want to see Alen become more and more stern because Reamus keeps on being impatient and difficult.
The new sprites are great, but the ones for Alen feel a bit off. I think it's because of his neutral sprite/s. The shading on them is less pronounced than the others. The difference is juuuust enough to be distracting when they appear right after one another.
About Alen raising his voice, I think it may have been entirely justified. I get the feeling he may have tried to teach someone else to use magic only to have disastrous results, leading to his apprehension towards teaching Reamus and how overly emotional he seems to get during the whole scene.
As for the abstract monologues, they seemed fitting in my opinion. People don't always have coherent thought processes, and with how Reamus seems to get lost in thought fairly often, his mind is likely to wander.
Yeah, I'm happy to concede my point about the monologue thing. It honestly is subjective, and I can see it being completely fine for other people. It wouldn't really bother me either way if there's a change there or not. I still do think it's a bit of a slog to read though, but again, it's not ruining anything for me.
As for the Alen thing, I was mostly going off of what we already know of Alen. Yeah, he may have had a bad experience with teaching magic before, but we don't have anything about that. At least, not yet? I don't know if we'll get anything like that in the future. If we do, then all is mostly fine. But for now, we've known Alen to have a lot of patience and care with Reamus. Teaching Reamus magic is something he's taking very seriously because Reamus' (and Jymsar's) life could depend on it. I completely agree Alen was justified in raising his voice at Reamus. My issue was that it felt too sudden, and it just came across as a little jarring.
Besides, even if this was a bit of foreshadowing at Alen's past, I'd have to say it's done poorly. All we get is Alen suddenly raising his voice, and then pleading for Reamus to take learning magic seriously. He said himself he needs Reamus to learn magic so he might be able to understand the curse better. The focus is more on "You need to learn magic so I might be able to save you," not "You need to learn magic this way or X could happen." You know, if that's what that scene was going for.
Really enjoyed the newest update! It was nice getting some less serious time with both Alen and Jymsar, Alen's definitely one of those teachers who won't let you off the hook easy. Can't wait for the next one!
Hmmm, Since the next update is taking too long I'm getting the feeling the GigaSaddle is preparing something especially great for us, now Im getting more hyped for the next update ★w★
Don't get too hyped. This next update is going to be a little simpler. I've just been busy and dealing with some personal stuff that has kept me from working on Pervader.
Ahhh, I see, No problem there, as long as your ok with it, I'll be willing to wait, No point in rushing something if something else gets affected by it right? Hope you're doing well, And always remember, There are always people who support you! ^^
While playing it I can feel your devotion on the story, and it's amazing the way the characters transmit their feelings and emotions. Like that part when Jymsar gets angry at us at the inn right before going to bed, I really could feel his hate towards us (or should i say towards the situation) you are doing an amazing job man, keep it up! It's paying off!
I really love the story you're crafting so far in this! A kind and cautious MC who's lacking in a bit of power (compared to his companions) but not helpless is refreshing. There's a lot of charm to his humbleness. I'm interested to see how you flesh out the magic and politics of the world more too.
wow the game well known now haha. im so happy! keep it up bro! ill help yah to get other people who love this kind of vn. haha " i choose life to support"
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Glad to be back!
I feel something big is coming. Or maybe he's dead. Eitherway, it will shook the fandom.
Hoping it's a big update
He's alive guys lmao. Don't say such a thing
Where are you Gigasaddle, I hope you're doing well. I miss your vn
Soon
Love uuuu. <3
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Loved Reamus and Jymsar. I want to know more about Jymsar. Hope update 0.4 is close.
I really love this kind of story.
this novel is fucking awesome, Im really glad we dont just jump in the sex or romance, there is nothing wrong with that approach but sometimes its nice to read a slow burn novel, I also love the worldbuilding of this game, its like the world matters to you just as much as the characters and I really like the magic, question: do u have any idea how long this is gonna be? I hope its very long. The only "complaint" I have is that we only see the mc once, kinda wish we could see his face and his kinda sexy body more often lol
It's long
(˵ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°˵)
*gulps and flushes red*
"Oh..."
True
I'm about to start playing this game... does it have any sexual scenes or explicit nudity scenes? just to be sure, thanks :)
Not yet
And there is sexual tension between characters sometime? or not even that just yet?
It is pretty new so not yet kinda there is like one kinda like that but not really since I have heard him state before that romance and that stuff will be in later patches right now it is just the amazing story also sorry for answering for you gigasaddle just wanted to get you some more time to work on 4.0 or whatever will be next
oh, thanks then. How long does it take to update? Once a month, like other VNs?
Hi Giga. I have a problem with updaiting my game. Can u halp me pls?
The problem is that I downloaded new version 0.3.0 but like in game it's still 0.2.2. Idk if it is only problem on my phone or on others too.
The files should be in order. I might have forgotten to update the version label somewhere, but everything should work. What's the problem exactly?
Like I said. I downloaded new version but in game is still 0.2.2 and even in file it is writen 0.2.2. I will try like uninstal and try instal again. Mayby this will work, but i will wait for your reply.
When you go into Credits, what version does it say?
Ok nvm. It's fine now.
when is the next one coming?
I'm not keeping a set schedule anymore. Might be next week, might be next month.
Oh well hope is next week then!
A short review:
First off, all of the characters are lovable, especially Jymsar, I wish there was more stuff with him.
Secondly... I think there's a lot of room to change all of the info dumps. When you first leave the town, the first time you see the background of that bright green hill, there's such a big info dump that it made me wanna skip, and a similar one when you meet Harren.
I love it! I love it so very much!
The update is great! Love it!
Can't wait for the showing their sigil scenes to come out! hehe ;)
I finally got around to playing this update and I really enjoyed it, but when Jymsar joked about me sleeping like a princess, why couldn't I shoot back with with something like "If I'm a princess, does that make you my knight in shining armor?" or something like that? I hear the joke in my head every time I read or think about that interaction and it saddens me to think it's not actually in the game...
Seriously though, this was a really good update; it was great to start getting more information about the magic system and how magic works in the world. I'm really looking forward to seeing how future updates will build upon what we've learned so far.
Jymsar looks sad 24/7
He do be hesitant :(
nsfw？
★★★★★ From me too!
Ok so this isn't much of a comment it is more of a question a dumb question but a question. I want to if I'm pronouncing Jymsar's name right is it Jim and Sar the way I have been saying it or no if I am saying it wrong please reply the correct pronunciation also I just finished 3.0 yesterday and I already want more it is great it is the first i have seen because I'm new to itch.io but can't wait for more.
That's right.
If you go to Google Translate and type in 'Jymsar,' set the language to English, Spanish or Italian, click the text-to-speech button and you'll hear it say it about right.
Reamus would probably say it like the French one.
Thanks and again great game can't wait I expect great things from this novel also love the characters, story, and pretty much everything about the novel keep doing your best I know I'm kinda being a suck up but I got to give complements to you.
MESSAGE for GigaSaddle Spoilers ahead, Don't scroll if you don't wanna get spoiled
I know you said to not get too hyped... BUT DAMN!! this is way better than what I expected, Even when I was hyped! I expected character development, and I got them!
Jymsar became more interactive and made me laugh a few times, It was such a great update to him,And saying that I was OVERJOYED when alen got expressions is a MASSIVE understatement, Especially the part where he was worried about us XDDD
The part where we were learning magic was a great treat for me, And I actually tried the things alen was saying in real life and it was SOOOOO RELAXING , I don't mind that this update took so long, Because it was well WORTH IT!
over all this update is wonderfully amazing!
★★★★★ from me!
I'll be waiting for your next update and to see more of jymsar soon, But you can take as much time as you need! No point rushing a development of such a great game right?
And as I always say...
"Onwards to the future! To the stars and beyond! So that we might find our own perfect Happy ending~!"
With regards and best wishes from
-Ace ayasaki
Does anyone else give Alen a somewhat subtle Scottish accent, or is it just me?
is there an update schedule
The plan is to make an update every month. Last update was way off schedule.
So while I am aiming for monthly releases, I will fail to deliver sometimes.
The next one is going to be more of a housekeeping update though, at the end of August. Very unlikely to progress the story, as I want to focus on character graphics and reworking some assets.
Story is great so far and music and almost everything(rate 5 star btw) i think from next update you should begin to add romance and continue story together
Hi there! I really like your work so far, and I'll be looking forward to future updates! Since you asked for feedback on this new update, I have some comments I want to share. I hope you find them helpful!
Very fair points, thank you! I'll be making some changes in a v0.3.1 patch.
About Alen raising his voice, I think it may have been entirely justified. I get the feeling he may have tried to teach someone else to use magic only to have disastrous results, leading to his apprehension towards teaching Reamus and how overly emotional he seems to get during the whole scene.
As for the abstract monologues, they seemed fitting in my opinion. People don't always have coherent thought processes, and with how Reamus seems to get lost in thought fairly often, his mind is likely to wander.
Yeah, I'm happy to concede my point about the monologue thing. It honestly is subjective, and I can see it being completely fine for other people. It wouldn't really bother me either way if there's a change there or not. I still do think it's a bit of a slog to read though, but again, it's not ruining anything for me.
As for the Alen thing, I was mostly going off of what we already know of Alen. Yeah, he may have had a bad experience with teaching magic before, but we don't have anything about that. At least, not yet? I don't know if we'll get anything like that in the future. If we do, then all is mostly fine. But for now, we've known Alen to have a lot of patience and care with Reamus. Teaching Reamus magic is something he's taking very seriously because Reamus' (and Jymsar's) life could depend on it. I completely agree Alen was justified in raising his voice at Reamus. My issue was that it felt too sudden, and it just came across as a little jarring.
Besides, even if this was a bit of foreshadowing at Alen's past, I'd have to say it's done poorly. All we get is Alen suddenly raising his voice, and then pleading for Reamus to take learning magic seriously. He said himself he needs Reamus to learn magic so he might be able to understand the curse better. The focus is more on "You need to learn magic so I might be able to save you," not "You need to learn magic this way or X could happen." You know, if that's what that scene was going for.
I just love to sit down and stare at the background listening to the music. Felt nostlagic.
Same here
Amazing update, and I love how Jymsar is slowly opening up more to us. I had a dumb smile when he laughed when the mushroom breakfast part lol
I already said that but Jymsar is my absolute favorite :3
You are doing an amazing job GigaSaddle!
There's a typo while Alen is teaching the mc about magic "I want to you to do this."
Loving the update, I'm normally such a slow reader but I manage to read your story super fast.
Oh also all the new expressions are wonderful, Alen almost feels like a new character now that he's emoting so much!
Literally never has any sort of story hooked me so fast as Pervader has, no exaggeration. Thanks so much for this visual novel, GigaSaddle.
Apk is behind D:
The apk is up to date, it's just I forgot to rename the file to reflect the actual version, so it still says 202 instead of 300.
It's fine!
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Really enjoyed the newest update! It was nice getting some less serious time with both Alen and Jymsar, Alen's definitely one of those teachers who won't let you off the hook easy. Can't wait for the next one!
Ok this update is getting longer to the point that I'm wondering if the creator has something amazing to show :)
Wow, this is amazing! So beautiful and well-written, I'm overwhelmed to know that you do all by yourself! Congrats GigaSaddle!!
The worldbuilding and magic system is absolutely delightful!
:)
Ask, when will you get the Spanish language out? 🤔
I don't know Spanish. Sorry!
Lmao Same.
I could translate the whole novel to spanish ^^
If you do I would be happy to help :)
Hmmm, Since the next update is taking too long I'm getting the feeling the GigaSaddle is preparing something especially great for us, now Im getting more hyped for the next update ★w★
Oh noooo...
Don't get too hyped. This next update is going to be a little simpler. I've just been busy and dealing with some personal stuff that has kept me from working on Pervader.
Ahhh, I see, No problem there, as long as your ok with it, I'll be willing to wait, No point in rushing something if something else gets affected by it right? Hope you're doing well, And always remember, There are always people who support you! ^^
GigaSaddle are you the only one working on pervader? Like... you know, the background, the sprites, the coding and the story?
Yep! Solo project.
Also, I am thankful to the creator of Minotaur Hotel for his help behind the scenes.
Man that's really awesome, YOU are awesome!
While playing it I can feel your devotion on the story, and it's amazing the way the characters transmit their feelings and emotions. Like that part when Jymsar gets angry at us at the inn right before going to bed, I really could feel his hate towards us (or should i say towards the situation) you are doing an amazing job man, keep it up! It's paying off!
I just gave Pervader 5 stars ^^
<3
Love it
Goodjob gigasaddle
Thanks :)
I really love the story you're crafting so far in this! A kind and cautious MC who's lacking in a bit of power (compared to his companions) but not helpless is refreshing. There's a lot of charm to his humbleness. I'm interested to see how you flesh out the magic and politics of the world more too.
Yeah, I really hoped people would like Reamus.
Who's the artist? man i can't wait for next update
It's me!
You're doing an excellent job! (in particular, I like Jonah and... his bulge!)
wow the game well known now haha. im so happy! keep it up bro! ill help yah to get other people who love this kind of vn. haha " i choose life to support"
do your best bro!
I check this page daily for new updates, I'm obsessed with this VN.
There will be an update this month, hopefully next week.
Can't wait i soo am in love with this game its not even funny keep up the good work 😅😂😀😍🤗😆😆