Pervader

Miss this vn :(

ok the different sprits just for expressing eye movements is a touch i wished all vns had this is awesome i love it so much wkej;oiug[wiuger[iq

I miss it so much! There's no other game like this one

I love this VN and hope the next update will be out someday. I hope GigaSaddle is feeling better and has the time to continue his magnificent work.

I really miss this VN. It is one of my favorite fantasy stories.

the auto forward button doesnt seem to work :(

GigaSaddle, I hope you're doing well. Your novel is one of my favourites and I hope you one day will finish it. No matter what, you've already made something great and don't feel discouraged or pressured. I understand how difficult it can be at times to manage everything in one's life, and I hope soon you'll be in a great place and let us all see the rest that this story holds. :)

love this game so much! 💕💕

1 of the BEST Vn game I've ever played. Very intense story, I can felt what all the characters went through. Really enjoyed the story. I surly will stay tuned.

This read was simply exciting!, Loving the pace and character designs, the lore is so interesting too. It even has potential as a series imo

Jymsar's such a cutie patootie

LOVE your GAME so far keep up the GOOD WORK loving it

amazing art, nice storylines, and overall just super nice

I fell in love with this visual novelI 

I finished pervader (Jymsar route ofc) and now I'm sad because it was so damn good I couldn't stop reading to save my life. And then it ended, so now I'm sad

Woowoo! Just finished 0.18, and gotta say this IS a very good Novel. Thanks, Mino Hotel for recommending this. I cannot wait for the next update, cus the story has gotten me HOOKED!

this is a long comment since I just finished the novel and really looking forward to this novel so [spoiler]

Art

-Just as you look from the preview arts, you will certainly have a lot more beautiful views from this novel. It's beautiful, I can't much because it really is.

-The dialogues with a detailed backgrounds are amazingly well done

-character's design: the main cast (Reamus, Alen, Jymsar) designs are generic, but also outstanding, just like any side characters. I adore Follen and Marchedon design the most.

Characters

-Personalities: the main cast sometimes are childish and being strict are their whole personality at the beginning of the novel and some dialogues, but later on they got their character development and be likable. The side characters are not annoying and pushing the main cast to go further, good.

-Relationship between characters: Jymsar and other watchmen; it kinda cute, I don't have much to say. Alen and Chila; their interactions between two are short but we will learn further on on Alen's prespective, it can tell why the two acting these way, Alen acting toward Reamus and Alen's goal which is nice.

Plot

-Very confusing at the beginning, still confusing further on but not as diffucult as the beginning to catch up, really worth the time spending to this novel

-if you are looking to romanized the characters, then this is not the novel you looking for, it is a heavy plot with world building and lot to read, but the novel isn't finished so they will be more to look forward to

-There's a side non-canon that has an nsfw pics. I feel awkward going through Reamus and Marshall lmao, the art of them going at it are amazing is as good as any other backgrounds.

Decisions and Routes

This is the main issue I wanting to talk to the creator, GigaSaddle, I appreciate whether you wanting your plot and interactions to be, because I know it's using lot of times to having many routes

-There are too little interactions we can choose, only two options.

-Most of the decisions didn't do anything further to the plot, only few dialouges are changed. Such as; Anny's nails (I didn't see this one coming because it so random and why do this even a decision), the shadow's accept or reject (why is this an option when rejecting only changed the first few messages), truth or lie being umbral to Everwind (this one I expected the most but he spotted the lie kinda into his character)

-The only interact I see that changes the story is either stay with Alen or Jymsar, further when we chose who to stay with, there's only one decision and just one until it just a whole reading part, and that decision didn't push the story further or change the path anything.

[If you reading this until now, I recommend this novel]

when will the next update drop?

Downloaded it for the hunky men, kept playing for the excellent writing.

Seriously! This is some of the greatest writing, world building and art I've ever seen in a VN. So good, in fact, I had to create an Itch.io account just to sing its praises. Everything about it is completely enthralling.

This is bl/yaoi? Or have character customization?

Man the game is so immersive and so good that i dreamt about it too lol