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kinda weird question but whenever you add nsfw scenes will you be able to chose between dominant and submissive?

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I plan on having that option for one of the scenes, but nothing is set in stone yet.

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Really loving the story so far c:

Hey, umm Im quite new to this game and I like to be updated on the storyline. How can I update the game without losing my progress, I haven't seen any update button or something lately. Thank you if there will be a respond to this

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You only have to download the latest version and load your last save. That's it!

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Im so pumped for the plot to get to a climax, (don't even think about making a lewd joke).

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I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATEEEEEEEEEEEE

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Don't have a set date yet, but it's at least a week away.

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Really am getting so engrossed in the story, I'm craving more and more. D:

I feel ya bud...I feel ya...

Is this VN NSFW?

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Not right now. Later down the line we'll get some intimate scenes.

Kissing scenes? 👀

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Yes, mouths will be involved.

This makes me laugh

The background music and the story really synced well together and made me cry 3 times. If i work and get some cash, i would really loved to support this project.

I'm really into this so far! There isn't a lot but it's so damn captivating already it makes me really look forward to what the end product will look like! I love both Alen and Jymsar but I'm really into Alen so far, so can't wait to romance him. Keep up the good work, this really does feel like something special and I can't wait to see how it'll blossom!

Ahh I wasnt able to click the link for their discord in the newest build! It just skipped to the next diogue in Android. Does anyone have the link for it? I wanna keep up on it! It's such an awesome game and I have to know what happens to the crew next! 

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I fell in love the moment I saw Jymsar smile! I really hope you could do more! ^^ This is a great game and i wish you good health and blessings ^^

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Thank you! Very kind words.

Your welcome ^^

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Loving the new update. There's one instance that I think got a little bugged out lol. Shortly after the dream in the tavern when the MC is telling Alen about the dream at one point the MC states "it's just that... I don't know if I can sleep well If I don't understand it." But the name listed for the dialogue is Alen. Least it's my impression that the MC is supposed to be the one stating it. Ignore if I'm wrong xD

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Nope, you're completely right! That's an error. Thanks for pointing it out.

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A must-read kinetic visual novel!! I mean, sure I enjoy having choices but this... This is a story I felt like I don't need to make choices, mainly because this plot is just beautiful and I can feel the climax coming up. Also, great taste of music to go along with the story. ^_^

Wait so like...I know it’s not a “dating” game whatsoever, but will “routes,” so to speak, be a thing? Or is it more of a “try to get on their better, friendlier side” type of novel?

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At the end of one of the future updates (probably v0.5.0) you will be able to pick your route, which will turn into a romance.

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Oh okay....I think some people talked about it in the comments, just wanted to clarify for myself🙃

Will you make a Jonah romancing route? (Please, say YES!!)

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This is not game! This is a book with some images. 
Thare only 2 o 3 choise you can do. Don't you think you can add more?

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There won't be a lot of choices I'm afraid. Pervader is mostly a kinetic visual novel.

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Pervader is perfect the way it is, I really mean it. Keep it up!

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The first update was amazing and the second is just as good, by the time you have finished this VN I'll be saying that they should make a live action tv show of it haha. 

I also have to give some props to the art as both the characters and the backgrounds look fantastic. Anyway, good luck on continuing and I can't wait to see what you have for us next.

I assumed that Alen and Jymsar will be Reamus LI, right? Then player gotta chose between these two

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That's right. Hope you like either of them.

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I already know who will I choose lol

Loving the game so far! I hope next chapter comes out soon enough ❤️

Can somone help me im having trouble installing it on android i have to extract the game but i cant find it anywehre

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You only have to locate the .apk file you downloaded and then execute it to install it. If you downloaded it straight to your device, it should be located in your default download folder.

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Hello, i'm just droppin by to say i really really REALLY enjoy this VN.

Such good writing, great story so far, appealing characters, and my favorite part is how already detailed your world building is, with all the names, geography, and lore. It definitely shows that you already have everything in your head, and only need to make it happen. 


I wanna see this story finished. You get my support.

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Jymsar’s smile is like................................................. a d o r a b l e

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Really enjoying what the game has so far! Can't wait to see where the story goes from here, especially with all the foreshadowing there's been already! The only genuine complaint I have about the game is more of a nitpick than anything; more of a personal preference than anything actually "wrong" or "in need of fixing".

I would like it if there were more choices to make in the game; I enjoy the feeling that I actually have some degree of influence over the main character and the progression of the story, even if it's just the illusion of choice. Again, I'm not saying that the game as it is needs to have more choices, or that it isn't a good game because there aren't many of them; I just have a preference for games, especially VNs, that offer a variety of choices to make, from major decisions to minor ones, from inconsequential choices to ones that have tangible effect on the story as a whole. I believe that more choices and variety thereof would definitely enhance the story, but it's by no means necessary to incorporate more choices for the story to be good.

Regardless of my personal preferences on choices in the narrative, the characters and greater story are, so far, very well written. We've only seen just a little bit of our main trio so far, but each of them already feels like a complex and multifaceted individual; like there's so much more going on beneath the surface that we've yet to see. In just a short amount of time, the story has established our main characters' personalities and foremost character traits, while demonstrating that these observations are only scratching the surface of who these characters are. Seeing those first few cracks in each character's facade of security and self assuredness in the situation - seeing how differently each of them is responding to their present circumstances - does a lot to make them appear three-dimensional and humanize them.

Now, given that the game has only seen its second release so far, anything I've said here is subjective at best and liable to change as the game sees more and more releases. Any and all misgivings or complaints I might have as of this current build, whether I've voiced them or not, could be completely resolved or changed in the game over the next few updates! Only time will tell how the story will unfold and evolve, but if the next few updates continue to impress like these first two builds have, then I'm definitely looking forward to seeing where the story goes! Keep up the good work!

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Pervader is going to be fairly linear, with only a few points where you can alter the narrative (picking your route, and some events near the end). I'm trying to add more flavorful choices in how Reamus reacts to things along the way, but I don't plan on adding anything that significantly alters the course of the story or modifies his character too much.

Just a heads up so you don't expect too much interactivity.

Hey, that's perfectly fine! Make the story you want to make! As I said, I have a personal preference to games that offer lots of interactivity, but that's all it is; I don't think a game needs to have lots of interactivity to be engaging or fun. Pervader has definitely hit the ground running in terms of quality. It's really impressive to think that what's been released so far has been entirely a one man effort! Keep up the good work!

I think this has a lot of potential! I quite enjoyed the writing and the story, with a few moments getting me quite emotional! Jymsar is totally my favorite, he's brooding and cold, yet also compassionate in his own way. The art is lovely as well, and I'm looking forward to more!

Wow I starting to love this! VN!

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Jymsar is without any doubt my favorite, he might be a bit too serious but I find him really cute

The story is super interesting , I really love it

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This update is great

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The art is great but the story could use a little work imo. It's a bit flat. Plus, I do want to have more choices in the future, even if it is a linear novel.


Here's to hoping that it improved because I do believe you have a good premise. 

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I fell the same, the project has a lot of potencial I'm hoping that in the future patchs we have more choices to explore the world and the characters.

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We're going to explore a lot, spatially and character-wise, but there won't be a lot of choices I'm afraid. At least not ones that have any significant impact.

I plan on giving Reamus more options in how he reacts to events, to add a bit of flavor.

But I'm also cautious. I don't want to give players the impression that they have more control over the story than they really have.

For the most part, Pervader is like an illustrated book.

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Loved the new refined sprites for Alen and Jymsar, all the artwork in this game is wonderful! Especially Jymsar's smile! Reamus needs to give him more reasons to smile in the future, can't wait to see what comes next

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ITS OUT YASSSSSSSSS 

Do we have to start over the game?

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No. Are you having some issue loading the game?

No, just wondering if we had to, considering the new update. If it was necessary.

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New update? hell yeah I've been waiting for so long hehe ;3

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Next Update tomorrow?


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Finally the Update Thanks Alot :D
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3 hours from now~

YEEEEEEYYYY!!!

do you by chance have discord server in which fans can support the game?

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There will be a discord link for everyone to join once v0.2.0 launches on June 5th (5 days).

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101% Must Play!!

I was amaze by the artwork and the story line was so exiting aswell cant wait for the next update especially the little watchmen hehe.

ooooohhhh. finally! a vn with magical items and mages ahahahaah this is a very exciting game....  i wonder what kind of adventure is waiting for that big guy wew... the mc is so damn hot! hrrmm... it should be fun if in some part of the ga,e the mc will be separated from the two... and have some fun hahaha . well good luck!! 5 stars for the win!

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Really interesting story, amazing art style, very good looking characters. Pervader has the potential to be one of the best visual novels.

Pervader is turning into my favorite visual novel already, I can't wait to see more.


PS: I'm already in love with Jymsar

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I’m glad you’ve decided to pursue a more linear style of VN. I think a lot of authors get really caught up in the ambitious “player” choice driven story which usually ends up more polarizing rather than personal 😂. There’s a reason great narratives aren’t asking you to try and change a bunch of shit. Good luck bro 

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Thanks. I think you can make interesting stories with lots of choices, but yeah it would be a lot tougher. I spent a lot of time ironing out the plot and realized that if I had to account for too many player choices, then things would quickly spiral out of control.

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The writing and story so far is absolutely marvelous. Looking forward to the updates to come~


-the art as well, something about it is very organic 

<3

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This does have sex scene right?

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Not yet. That will happen much later in the story.

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