this is a long comment since I just finished the novel and really looking forward to this novel so [spoiler]
Art
-Just as you look from the preview arts, you will certainly have a lot more beautiful views from this novel. It's beautiful, I can't much because it really is.
-The dialogues with a detailed backgrounds are amazingly well done
-character's design: the main cast (Reamus, Alen, Jymsar) designs are generic, but also outstanding, just like any side characters. I adore Follen and Marchedon design the most.
Characters
-Personalities: the main cast sometimes are childish and being strict are their whole personality at the beginning of the novel and some dialogues, but later on they got their character development and be likable. The side characters are not annoying and pushing the main cast to go further, good.
-Relationship between characters: Jymsar and other watchmen; it kinda cute, I don't have much to say. Alen and Chila; their interactions between two are short but we will learn further on on Alen's prespective, it can tell why the two acting these way, Alen acting toward Reamus and Alen's goal which is nice.
Plot
-Very confusing at the beginning, still confusing further on but not as diffucult as the beginning to catch up, really worth the time spending to this novel
-if you are looking to romanized the characters, then this is not the novel you looking for, it is a heavy plot with world building and lot to read, but the novel isn't finished so they will be more to look forward to
-There's a side non-canon that has an nsfw pics. I feel awkward going through Reamus and Marshall lmao, the art of them going at it are amazing is as good as any other backgrounds.
Decisions and Routes
This is the main issue I wanting to talk to the creator, GigaSaddle, I appreciate whether you wanting your plot and interactions to be, because I know it's using lot of times to having many routes
-There are too little interactions we can choose, only two options.
-Most of the decisions didn't do anything further to the plot, only few dialouges are changed. Such as; Anny's nails (I didn't see this one coming because it so random and why do this even a decision), the shadow's accept or reject (why is this an option when rejecting only changed the first few messages), truth or lie being umbral to Everwind (this one I expected the most but he spotted the lie kinda into his character)
-The only interact I see that changes the story is either stay with Alen or Jymsar, further when we chose who to stay with, there's only one decision and just one until it just a whole reading part, and that decision didn't push the story further or change the path anything.
[If you reading this until now, I recommend this novel]
Downloaded it for the hunky men, kept playing for the excellent writing.
Seriously! This is some of the greatest writing, world building and art I've ever seen in a VN. So good, in fact, I had to create an Itch.io account just to sing its praises. Everything about it is completely enthralling.
I just started this vn and can't figure out whether the backgrounds are filtered real images or not, since they are super detailed and must've taken tons of time to make if drawn.
(this is just me saying the art styles and everything look amazing)
yo so, i think you should update your version of ren'py to 8.0.3. Right now, the game doesnt "remember" what youve read between saves. i just think it would help to skip the events that happen in both routes
It should remember and skip sections already, as this has been a ren'py feature for a very long time. It might be an issue with your system or game files. I'd suggest double-checking things on your end, test other ren'py games, check that your save are working correctly, check your skip settings in Preferences.
i meant like, when you choose a different choice/route (after already reading the other one), the game just thinks its all new text, even if has some of the same text in both routes, that you have already read.
If you choose a different choice, you should always get a chunk of new text adapted to that choice.
There are probably a few lines of text that are duplicated in both routes, which might look like skip isn't working correctly, but for the most part the branching script should be unique to each route.
I'm not sure if you are referring to those small bits of duplicate text, or are encountering larger chunks of unskippable common text, which would be a bug. It might be useful if you can give me some examples of where this happens.
ok! First one that comes to mind is when (at the Sanctuary) you choose between those two choices when The Puffball (forgot his name ¡-¡) shows his amazing nails. So like, i've played this a few months ago (before 0.16), and I remember him giving Rheamus his little gift to the road. When playing again, after that scene, i remembered that he didnt gave him anything this time, so I tried to go back and choose the other line. After that little scene between them, the skip button didnt want to skip the common text (it being that "fight" with Chilas, which i read before going back), so I had to use the "skip unseen text" to get back to where I was.
Does this help? I kinda didnt finished it yet, so I cant actually say if it happens more times after this (atleast, in the new updates).
Inside the script those parts should be common text, so it should allow you to skip it if you've been through it already.
Occasionally I go over older parts in the story and make small adjustments, rewording things, updating sprites, or changing transforms. I'm not sure if this is the case, but I'm guessing that might mess up what ren'py considers seen or unseen text in some situations.
This is probably due to the corrected background in the latest update.
I'd recommend playing the older version, progressing until you no longer see the darker hideout background and saving there, then updating to the new version. If you save in the dream or outside, that should be good.
Hopeful for the next update❤️🙏 Now... I really hope that Jymsar will be okay, I can see him evolving in regards to his thinking about magic, but I can't imagine him really giving up his role in the guard.
On desktop this should not be a problem. You're probably playing on mobile if it's forcing you to start over.
Unfortunately, accessing save files on android isn't simple. It depends on your device and may even require root access. Normally the save files should be at this location:
If you've lost progress, it probably means your your system or your windows user settings have been modified in some way. All of your save files should be found at this location
Read the update in one breath! Beautiful! Can't wait for the actual romance plot! It's gonna be so oooooo good thank you thank you I hope I'll live to see the day :)
I think it says something that it's been so long since the last update and this story is still fresh in my mind. This game to me is like the perfect example of what I want these kind of VNs to be! Best of luck with further development, and I look forward to the next update. :)
The pastebin link contains multiple download links for different language versions. Two Português versions are available in that list, one for Windows and one for Mac. You have to copy that link and paste it in your browser to download the file.
It would help a lot if you described exactly what issue you are encountering, whether you cannot find a link, cannot access a link, you're getting an error, or anything of the sort.
Hey GigaSaddle, thank you so much for making or letting someone make a version in Portuguese, I'm really loving it and many others too, it's very rare to find a VN in Portuguese, thank you again, I'm even going to become a Patreon after seeing this. I'm Brazilian and Portuguese is my first language and it's really nice to read without worrying about not understanding something
I miss this game. I have this game to thank for introducing me to my all-time favorite music track "What Could Appear," which made several scenes in this VN unforgettable. The character development and world building is commendable also. I am eager to learn more about this world and its lore and magic system.
I decided to download the newest update to this story after having not played it since about a year ago. I have to admit, despite how long it's been I came back to the story remembering almost everything from the last time I'd read it. The newest stuff since I'd seen it last was interesting too, though I have to admit what happened to Jym scared me. Still, I look forward to seeing more of the story.
ok so i'm sorry but there is one flaw in the pervaders. The Mein is well if it's meant to prevent one from harming/killing others or even just other pervaders then well they would have to either come to a compromise to get the dagger or give it to Alen to study.
nah. They can attack each other. But if with intent to kill then it becomes a problem. Now while not giving them the dagger is not with the intent to kill, knowing they can kill those afflicted is well = to knowing you're killing them thus same as intent. It's not the same as accidentally killing someone as they had no intent on killing and didn't even know it'd kill.
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this is a long comment since I just finished the novel and really looking forward to this novel so [spoiler]
Art
-Just as you look from the preview arts, you will certainly have a lot more beautiful views from this novel. It's beautiful, I can't much because it really is.
-The dialogues with a detailed backgrounds are amazingly well done
-character's design: the main cast (Reamus, Alen, Jymsar) designs are generic, but also outstanding, just like any side characters. I adore Follen and Marchedon design the most.
Characters
-Personalities: the main cast sometimes are childish and being strict are their whole personality at the beginning of the novel and some dialogues, but later on they got their character development and be likable. The side characters are not annoying and pushing the main cast to go further, good.
-Relationship between characters: Jymsar and other watchmen; it kinda cute, I don't have much to say. Alen and Chila; their interactions between two are short but we will learn further on on Alen's prespective, it can tell why the two acting these way, Alen acting toward Reamus and Alen's goal which is nice.
Plot
-Very confusing at the beginning, still confusing further on but not as diffucult as the beginning to catch up, really worth the time spending to this novel
-if you are looking to romanized the characters, then this is not the novel you looking for, it is a heavy plot with world building and lot to read, but the novel isn't finished so they will be more to look forward to
-There's a side non-canon that has an nsfw pics. I feel awkward going through Reamus and Marshall lmao, the art of them going at it are amazing is as good as any other backgrounds.
Decisions and Routes
This is the main issue I wanting to talk to the creator, GigaSaddle, I appreciate whether you wanting your plot and interactions to be, because I know it's using lot of times to having many routes
-There are too little interactions we can choose, only two options.
-Most of the decisions didn't do anything further to the plot, only few dialouges are changed. Such as; Anny's nails (I didn't see this one coming because it so random and why do this even a decision), the shadow's accept or reject (why is this an option when rejecting only changed the first few messages), truth or lie being umbral to Everwind (this one I expected the most but he spotted the lie kinda into his character)
-The only interact I see that changes the story is either stay with Alen or Jymsar, further when we chose who to stay with, there's only one decision and just one until it just a whole reading part, and that decision didn't push the story further or change the path anything.
[If you reading this until now, I recommend this novel]
when will the next update drop?
Hi, I have kind of a lore question but I don’t know if it’s appropriate?
Does ejaculate of a watchmen carry the properties of magic suppression tea? :)
In furry logic, anything is possible!
Downloaded it for the hunky men, kept playing for the excellent writing.
Seriously! This is some of the greatest writing, world building and art I've ever seen in a VN. So good, in fact, I had to create an Itch.io account just to sing its praises. Everything about it is completely enthralling.
This is bl/yaoi? Or have character customization?
Man the game is so immersive and so good that i dreamt about it too lol
I just started this vn and can't figure out whether the backgrounds are filtered real images or not, since they are super detailed and must've taken tons of time to make if drawn.
(this is just me saying the art styles and everything look amazing)
also super small typo near the beginning, wich instead of which
"On the counter lay several bars of barillash soap, some of wich were more or less used up"
Did something happen with the font? The dots aren't showing up properly in the backlog anymore.
I see. I guess the backlog font doesn't have an ellipsis symbol and I never noticed. I'll have to fix that.
I wonder what will happen at that Umbral meeting in the city. I feel things are going to get complicated, I smell a climax😬🧐
yo so, i think you should update your version of ren'py to 8.0.3. Right now, the game doesnt "remember" what youve read between saves. i just think it would help to skip the events that happen in both routes
(does it make sense? god i hope it does)
It should remember and skip sections already, as this has been a ren'py feature for a very long time. It might be an issue with your system or game files. I'd suggest double-checking things on your end, test other ren'py games, check that your save are working correctly, check your skip settings in Preferences.
i meant like, when you choose a different choice/route (after already reading the other one), the game just thinks its all new text, even if has some of the same text in both routes, that you have already read.
sorryy, hard to explain with ma broken english :v
No worries!
If you choose a different choice, you should always get a chunk of new text adapted to that choice.
There are probably a few lines of text that are duplicated in both routes, which might look like skip isn't working correctly, but for the most part the branching script should be unique to each route.
I'm not sure if you are referring to those small bits of duplicate text, or are encountering larger chunks of unskippable common text, which would be a bug. It might be useful if you can give me some examples of where this happens.
ok! First one that comes to mind is when (at the Sanctuary) you choose between those two choices when The Puffball (forgot his name ¡-¡) shows his amazing nails. So like, i've played this a few months ago (before 0.16), and I remember him giving Rheamus his little gift to the road. When playing again, after that scene, i remembered that he didnt gave him anything this time, so I tried to go back and choose the other line. After that little scene between them, the skip button didnt want to skip the common text (it being that "fight" with Chilas, which i read before going back), so I had to use the "skip unseen text" to get back to where I was.
Does this help? I kinda didnt finished it yet, so I cant actually say if it happens more times after this (atleast, in the new updates).
Yes, that helps, thank you!
Inside the script those parts should be common text, so it should allow you to skip it if you've been through it already.
Occasionally I go over older parts in the story and make small adjustments, rewording things, updating sprites, or changing transforms. I'm not sure if this is the case, but I'm guessing that might mess up what ren'py considers seen or unseen text in some situations.
I'll look into it.
Will there be NSFW scenes of Reamus with Jymsar and Jymsar's father?
Probably not
Too bad 😔
yo, do you have any social media or place where you post art? started reading again and I cant get enough of it
Yes. I mainly use twitter nowadays, though I upload art to itaku too. I use the same username (gigasaddle) everywhere.
Hello!
How many routes are available right now?
There are only two routes.
I'm having trouble loading my save from the last update.
This is probably due to the corrected background in the latest update.
I'd recommend playing the older version, progressing until you no longer see the darker hideout background and saving there, then updating to the new version. If you save in the dream or outside, that should be good.
Thanks
With each update, I admire the text of the story more and more. It's very beautiful and cool. Thank you for this story 💗
Hopeful for the next update❤️🙏 Now... I really hope that Jymsar will be okay, I can see him evolving in regards to his thinking about magic, but I can't imagine him really giving up his role in the guard.
oh the storyline is sooo good, I just love the dynamic between those three
Do you have version 0.17 in Portuguese?
那个他告诉我内容违反相关法律怎么办？(⊙o⊙)！😭😭😭
有中文吗？
Here or here.
内容违反相关法律啊！链接没有办法整
can you plz explain the end of the new update in case i got the wrong one
The current build ends in a dream.
ohhh so im all good thx you i was lost hahah thx so much ik im super dumb
i got the new update and its making me restart from the beginning i have a good amount of progress. what do i do
On desktop this should not be a problem. You're probably playing on mobile if it's forcing you to start over.
Unfortunately, accessing save files on android isn't simple. It depends on your device and may even require root access. Normally the save files should be at this location:
sd:/Android/data/[pervader]/files/saves/
Good luck!
thx you but im on a GP73 leopard 8rd its a going laptop andits windows
If you've lost progress, it probably means your your system or your windows user settings have been modified in some way. All of your save files should be found at this location
C:\Users\[Your Username]\AppData\Roaming\RenPy\Pervader
and they should persist in between updates, even if you delete the game folder.
Read the update in one breath! Beautiful! Can't wait for the actual romance plot! It's gonna be so oooooo good thank you thank you I hope I'll live to see the day :)
Thank you so much for the update. New cute husbando too!
Poor Kitty ♥
好耶，终于更新了
How long is the current game
Just finished reading the new update! Loved it!
Get in loser, we're reading the new Pervader update!
GigaSaddle, do we have any prediction of when the public build 0.17.0 will be released?
Nothing's a sure thing...
Just kidding, it's up right now!
Oh my god GigaSaddle I've been biting my nails all week waiting for this... Now it's finally out thanks for this can't wait to see my Jymsar❤️
I think it says something that it's been so long since the last update and this story is still fresh in my mind. This game to me is like the perfect example of what I want these kind of VNs to be! Best of luck with further development, and I look forward to the next update. :)
I cannot find the Portuguese version for windows
The link is on the main page, under "Translations". Is it not working?
no, it is not.
The link seems to work correctly on my end. What error are you encountering?
now it goes to this site https://pastebin.com/WjW8ZSVW but I can not dowload from there
The pastebin link contains multiple download links for different language versions. Two Português versions are available in that list, one for Windows and one for Mac. You have to copy that link and paste it in your browser to download the file.
It would help a lot if you described exactly what issue you are encountering, whether you cannot find a link, cannot access a link, you're getting an error, or anything of the sort.
Hey GigaSaddle, thank you so much for making or letting someone make a version in Portuguese, I'm really loving it and many others too, it's very rare to find a VN in Portuguese, thank you again, I'm even going to become a Patreon after seeing this. I'm Brazilian and Portuguese is my first language and it's really nice to read without worrying about not understanding something
Lovely!
I miss this game. I have this game to thank for introducing me to my all-time favorite music track "What Could Appear," which made several scenes in this VN unforgettable. The character development and world building is commendable also. I am eager to learn more about this world and its lore and magic system.
CRYING SCREAMING THROWING UP I NEED AN UPDATE MY POOR BABY JYM
Also I love everything about this game, art, music, writing, never give up on this or I'm going to simply die
No worries. There will be an update soon~
I decided to download the newest update to this story after having not played it since about a year ago. I have to admit, despite how long it's been I came back to the story remembering almost everything from the last time I'd read it. The newest stuff since I'd seen it last was interesting too, though I have to admit what happened to Jym scared me. Still, I look forward to seeing more of the story.
ok so i'm sorry but there is one flaw in the pervaders. The Mein is well if it's meant to prevent one from harming/killing others or even just other pervaders then well they would have to either come to a compromise to get the dagger or give it to Alen to study.
nah. They can attack each other. But if with intent to kill then it becomes a problem. Now while not giving them the dagger is not with the intent to kill, knowing they can kill those afflicted is well = to knowing you're killing them thus same as intent. It's not the same as accidentally killing someone as they had no intent on killing and didn't even know it'd kill.
Can't wait for the next update!!
Can't wait for the next update, this was great