I don't comment often however I do want to say this. The world building that is going on is amazing. The magic system from what it has been reveled might be in my top ten favorites. with that said, I am a sucker for worlds with interesting magic systems. I'm very excited to see where the story does.
Cuando saldrá el juego en español es que me gusta bastante la historia, pero es difícil traducirlo en el traductor Google y casi siempre me pierdo pls en español
Hi, I'm liking the story so far. :) I noticed you wrote about Alen & Jymsar sprites needing more attention. I don't know if you're already done with that / how much you're changing them, but I figured I could make a suggestion of some minor edits for Jymsar:
Basically, in the current art his shoulders are a bit asymmetrical, and the nose&eyes are rotated different ways, making his head feel slightly warped. And finally, the left cheek is more pointed and forward than his right cheek.
Sorry for the unsolicited comment - the art is great already, better than what I can draw. :) Feel free to disregard my comment if you disagree, it's just my subjective opinion.
Hmm you're right, my face change does make it more human-ish, probably a bit too much. I still think there's something slightly odd going on with the face, as if he's tilting his head a little, but his snout isnt tilted with his head.
Maybe something like this? I tried keeping puma-like proportions while still trying to make all his head-parts have the same rotation.
The symmetrical anchor marked in pink (his upper shoulders) is by far the most obvious outlier, and the only one I'd suggest is an 'error', the rest could very well be stylistic choice.
Another thing I just noticed is that his hair tuft goes over what we see as his left eye, making me see it as an eyebrow. It makes the face look a little more asymmetrical than it is...
Worth noticing that Im only reacting to this facial asymmetry on this 'sorta sad' expression - the smiling/laughing face looks great. Im just nitpicking this specific one because it's used a lot.
Hello I'm not done with this update yet but I was wondering if you know when the next one will come out and I am also wondering if and when it will become "intimate" I apologise for bad grammer lol
Thank you for the response can't wait and I love this game and it's hard to believe that your doing it all alone must be a lot of work again thank you for response
I've enjoyed your game so far, so thanks for all your hard work. Thumbs up! : D
Here are things I'd personally like to see implemented:
- more gestures of the characters (which would require more artworks, I guess ^__^') - artwork of the main character in the dialogues, ideally with a range of different gestures and facial expressions (I mean he's gorgeous - don't hide his beauty from us! x'D)
What I've enjoyed so far:
- vivid storytelling and overall theme - your color palette chosen for the characters and backgrounds - the amount of detail put into the artworks overall
Great update! I really enjoyed it. The CGs, the music, and the writing are each respectively beautifully done and are also just, very well put together, this feeling of unison is what drawn me into the story and what encourages me to dive into the mentality of each character.
The second half of the story where it showcases the tension between Jymsar and Chilas feels so realistic, especially of right now with so many groups of people holding uneasy feelings about one another. Everybody suffered because of the other side, everybody is the victim, and neither can or wants to let go because they believe in themselves and what they stood for.
I did not expect this update to have so much content, that was a nice surprise. The story so far is turning out very engaging and I love new Jymsar's sprites. Can't wait for the next update!!
It won't let me install the newest version on Android. I can download the apk file, but when I try to install it from there it says "app not installed"
I've encountered this issue as well, but I don't know how to fix it. Make sure to back up your saves if you try this, but you can delete the previous version and then it should allow you to install the new version without any error.
I guess cause of theire phone Memory. It's with my phone the same problem. I musst have more then 3% memory free. Or the game don't changed anything in the important codes. Then it things that'd the same version like before of the game.
It has really been worth all this waiting, I really enjoyed every minute of this update, the picturesque landscapes, characters and story is great, and the music, the music is amazing, excellent work. I look forward to the next update.
this novel is fucking awesome, Im really glad we dont just jump in the sex or romance, there is nothing wrong with that approach but sometimes its nice to read a slow burn novel, I also love the worldbuilding of this game, its like the world matters to you just as much as the characters and I really like the magic, question: do u have any idea how long this is gonna be? I hope its very long. The only "complaint" I have is that we only see the mc once, kinda wish we could see his face and his kinda sexy body more often lol
It is pretty new so not yet kinda there is like one kinda like that but not really since I have heard him state before that romance and that stuff will be in later patches right now it is just the amazing story also sorry for answering for you gigasaddle just wanted to get you some more time to work on 4.0 or whatever will be next
Like I said. I downloaded new version but in game is still 0.2.2 and even in file it is writen 0.2.2. I will try like uninstal and try instal again. Mayby this will work, but i will wait for your reply.
First off, all of the characters are lovable, especially Jymsar, I wish there was more stuff with him.
Secondly... I think there's a lot of room to change all of the info dumps. When you first leave the town, the first time you see the background of that bright green hill, there's such a big info dump that it made me wanna skip, and a similar one when you meet Harren.
I finally got around to playing this update and I really enjoyed it, but when Jymsar joked about me sleeping like a princess, why couldn't I shoot back with with something like "If I'm a princess, does that make you my knight in shining armor?" or something like that? I hear the joke in my head every time I read or think about that interaction and it saddens me to think it's not actually in the game...
Seriously though, this was a really good update; it was great to start getting more information about the magic system and how magic works in the world. I'm really looking forward to seeing how future updates will build upon what we've learned so far.
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I don't comment often however I do want to say this. The world building that is going on is amazing. The magic system from what it has been reveled might be in my top ten favorites. with that said, I am a sucker for worlds with interesting magic systems. I'm very excited to see where the story does.
oh two other notes. Anatole, is adorable. <3 and I love the music
So will the romance bits come in build 5 or 6?
Nope, after that
Alright thanks
Cuando saldrá el juego en español es que me gusta bastante la historia, pero es difícil traducirlo en el traductor Google y casi siempre me pierdo pls en español
Will there be an update this month?
Maybe...
I'd like to get it out for Chirstmas, but we'll see
Alrighty! No worries :)
Hi, I'm liking the story so far. :) I noticed you wrote about Alen & Jymsar sprites needing more attention. I don't know if you're already done with that / how much you're changing them, but I figured I could make a suggestion of some minor edits for Jymsar:
https://imgur.com/a/bFpOuHi
Basically, in the current art his shoulders are a bit asymmetrical, and the nose&eyes are rotated different ways, making his head feel slightly warped. And finally, the left cheek is more pointed and forward than his right cheek.
Sorry for the unsolicited comment - the art is great already, better than what I can draw. :) Feel free to disregard my comment if you disagree, it's just my subjective opinion.
I actually agree on the shoulders...but the face change makes him look a little TOO humanoid
Hmm you're right, my face change does make it more human-ish, probably a bit too much. I still think there's something slightly odd going on with the face, as if he's tilting his head a little, but his snout isnt tilted with his head.
Maybe something like this? I tried keeping puma-like proportions while still trying to make all his head-parts have the same rotation.
https://imgur.com/a/XTpH32K
https://imgur.com/a/86opLJq
The symmetrical anchor marked in pink (his upper shoulders) is by far the most obvious outlier, and the only one I'd suggest is an 'error', the rest could very well be stylistic choice.
Another thing I just noticed is that his hair tuft goes over what we see as his left eye, making me see it as an eyebrow. It makes the face look a little more asymmetrical than it is...
Worth noticing that Im only reacting to this facial asymmetry on this 'sorta sad' expression - the smiling/laughing face looks great. Im just nitpicking this specific one because it's used a lot.
Yeah I saw what you were talking about...the change looks good :)
Noted, thank you
I love the story and drawings so much! Thank you so much for this astonishing VN!😊
If i may ask, what are the character that has a route in this game?
Is the 'marshal' guy has a route? I actually dont know if its his name or what not lol
The only routes are Alen and Jymsar.
Awww i see, Thank you for replying
Jymsar confirmed gae. YEET!
Hello I'm not done with this update yet but I was wondering if you know when the next one will come out and I am also wondering if and when it will become "intimate" I apologise for bad grammer lol
I'm pretty bad with deadlines, so I try not to say anymore.
As far as intimacy goes, you'll be able to pick your route at the end of 0.6, which is after the next update (0.5).
Thank you for the response can't wait and I love this game and it's hard to believe that your doing it all alone must be a lot of work again thank you for response
Hi GigaSaddle! : 3
I've enjoyed your game so far, so thanks for all your hard work. Thumbs up! : D
Here are things I'd personally like to see implemented:
- more gestures of the characters (which would require more artworks, I guess ^__^')
- artwork of the main character in the dialogues, ideally with a range of different gestures and facial expressions (I mean he's gorgeous - don't hide his beauty from us! x'D)
What I've enjoyed so far:
- vivid storytelling and overall theme
- your color palette chosen for the characters and backgrounds
- the amount of detail put into the artworks overall
So... please keep up the good work, okay? ^____^
Thanks!
Can't wait for the next update :3
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Is the current build nsfw? I know you've said it will be nsfw at some point.
Really enjoying this vn :)
Not yet, but we're getting closer
:D
Your getting closer....how close?😉simp;)
The way it's written is pure bliss, just like a spell!
Eu simplismente amei, a historia fico muito boa serio mesmo, eu terminei o jogo agora e vim pra ca para dar 5 estrelas
Ayee I couldn't wait any longer! Usually I wait for a few more updates but I can't anymore I gotta read dis now... Ha! I'm too Ficken addicted to this
Great update! I really enjoyed it. The CGs, the music, and the writing are each respectively beautifully done and are also just, very well put together, this feeling of unison is what drawn me into the story and what encourages me to dive into the mentality of each character.
The second half of the story where it showcases the tension between Jymsar and Chilas feels so realistic, especially of right now with so many groups of people holding uneasy feelings about one another. Everybody suffered because of the other side, everybody is the victim, and neither can or wants to let go because they believe in themselves and what they stood for.
Great update! Will we be expecting an update next month, next three month, or just when it's ready?
Always when it's ready.
Hopefully this month.
Thank you for new update giga. I am so excited
Stay save<3
Thanks and enjoy!
Is there a love interest in this game?
I guess so.
Umm who is it?
I guess it will be the knight.
You will be able to romance either Jymsar or Alen
I'm soooo excited thank u <3
I did not expect this update to have so much content, that was a nice surprise. The story so far is turning out very engaging and I love new Jymsar's sprites. Can't wait for the next update!!
It won't let me install the newest version on Android. I can download the apk file, but when I try to install it from there it says "app not installed"
I'm having the same problem :(
I've encountered this issue as well, but I don't know how to fix it. Make sure to back up your saves if you try this, but you can delete the previous version and then it should allow you to install the new version without any error.
I guess cause of theire phone Memory. It's with my phone the same problem. I musst have more then 3% memory free. Or the game don't changed anything in the important codes. Then it things that'd the same version like before of the game.
definitely not a memory issue here
Just some things that would be the reasons
I dunno why, but I can't download the new update😔
Can you tell me where are you trying to download it from? What platform are you on? What error is it giving you?
Is 0.4.1 a fix of something?
Just some spelling and other minor errors.
Ah, ok. Good to know!
It has really been worth all this waiting, I really enjoyed every minute of this update, the picturesque landscapes, characters and story is great, and the music, the music is amazing, excellent work. I look forward to the next update.
Thank you! I hope I can deliver the next update sooner this time
Glad to see you're back!
Glad to be back!
I feel something big is coming. Or maybe he's dead. Eitherway, it will shook the fandom.
Hoping it's a big update
He's alive guys lmao. Don't say such a thing
Where are you Gigasaddle, I hope you're doing well. I miss your vn
Soon
Love uuuu. <3
Eu baixei o de android agora presiso de alguma coisa pra entra nao to conseguindo me ajuda
algum br aqui q milagre
Loved Reamus and Jymsar. I want to know more about Jymsar. Hope update 0.4 is close.
I really love this kind of story.
this novel is fucking awesome, Im really glad we dont just jump in the sex or romance, there is nothing wrong with that approach but sometimes its nice to read a slow burn novel, I also love the worldbuilding of this game, its like the world matters to you just as much as the characters and I really like the magic, question: do u have any idea how long this is gonna be? I hope its very long. The only "complaint" I have is that we only see the mc once, kinda wish we could see his face and his kinda sexy body more often lol
It's long
(˵ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°˵)
*gulps and flushes red*
"Oh..."
True
I'm about to start playing this game... does it have any sexual scenes or explicit nudity scenes? just to be sure, thanks :)
Not yet
And there is sexual tension between characters sometime? or not even that just yet?
It is pretty new so not yet kinda there is like one kinda like that but not really since I have heard him state before that romance and that stuff will be in later patches right now it is just the amazing story also sorry for answering for you gigasaddle just wanted to get you some more time to work on 4.0 or whatever will be next
oh, thanks then. How long does it take to update? Once a month, like other VNs?
Hi Giga. I have a problem with updaiting my game. Can u halp me pls?
The problem is that I downloaded new version 0.3.0 but like in game it's still 0.2.2. Idk if it is only problem on my phone or on others too.
The files should be in order. I might have forgotten to update the version label somewhere, but everything should work. What's the problem exactly?
Like I said. I downloaded new version but in game is still 0.2.2 and even in file it is writen 0.2.2. I will try like uninstal and try instal again. Mayby this will work, but i will wait for your reply.
When you go into Credits, what version does it say?
Ok nvm. It's fine now.
when is the next one coming?
I'm not keeping a set schedule anymore. Might be next week, might be next month.
Oh well hope is next week then!
A short review:
First off, all of the characters are lovable, especially Jymsar, I wish there was more stuff with him.
Secondly... I think there's a lot of room to change all of the info dumps. When you first leave the town, the first time you see the background of that bright green hill, there's such a big info dump that it made me wanna skip, and a similar one when you meet Harren.
I love it! I love it so very much!
The update is great! Love it!
Can't wait for the showing their sigil scenes to come out! hehe ;)
I finally got around to playing this update and I really enjoyed it, but when Jymsar joked about me sleeping like a princess, why couldn't I shoot back with with something like "If I'm a princess, does that make you my knight in shining armor?" or something like that? I hear the joke in my head every time I read or think about that interaction and it saddens me to think it's not actually in the game...
Seriously though, this was a really good update; it was great to start getting more information about the magic system and how magic works in the world. I'm really looking forward to seeing how future updates will build upon what we've learned so far.
Jymsar looks sad 24/7
He do be hesitant :(