Really liked this update, its nice to see a bit more from the pervader side of things (how their magic feels, the different sigils). Knowing that there are different categories of pervader sigil, I'm really hoping that we as the player get some say in how our magic develops

haha yes! finally.

I liked it! 

I especially want to give props to you for your writing style. English is not my mother tongue, so oftentimes I found myself struggling a bit with text-heavy VNs. If the story is not engaging enough I would most likely end up skipping a whole bunch of texts and convos just to reach for the CGs, but your writing has been very engaging thus far. There were some big, GRE-level words here and there (well, in my mind) that I had to look up, but I was not bothered at all (I'm actually kinda happy that I get to expand my vocabularies), the narrative made up for it. The overall flow of the story has been pretty smooth, it does not feel forced or framed for a certain outcome. So great job!

I do hope that, in the future, there could be more exploiting of the interactive elements of a VN. Like more choices and more significant effects, more freedom in exploring the magic you learned (like you can choose to learn different spells / incantations), secret/hidden events, etc. 

And, if you do plan to add nsfw stuff, I'd like to see some of those soon, too :)