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The first update was amazing and the second is just as good, by the time you have finished this VN I'll be saying that they should make a live action tv show of it haha. 

I also have to give some props to the art as both the characters and the backgrounds look fantastic. Anyway, good luck on continuing and I can't wait to see what you have for us next.

I assumed that Alen and Jymsar will be Reamus LI, right? Then player gotta chose between these two

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That's right. Hope you like either of them.

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I already know who will I choose lol

Loving the game so far! I hope next chapter comes out soon enough ❤️

Can somone help me im having trouble installing it on android i have to extract the game but i cant find it anywehre

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You only have to locate the .apk file you downloaded and then execute it to install it. If you downloaded it straight to your device, it should be located in your default download folder.

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Hello, i'm just droppin by to say i really really REALLY enjoy this VN.

Such good writing, great story so far, appealing characters, and my favorite part is how already detailed your world building is, with all the names, geography, and lore. It definitely shows that you already have everything in your head, and only need to make it happen. 


I wanna see this story finished. You get my support.

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Jymsar’s smile is like................................................. a d o r a b l e

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Really enjoying what the game has so far! Can't wait to see where the story goes from here, especially with all the foreshadowing there's been already! The only genuine complaint I have about the game is more of a nitpick than anything; more of a personal preference than anything actually "wrong" or "in need of fixing".

I would like it if there were more choices to make in the game; I enjoy the feeling that I actually have some degree of influence over the main character and the progression of the story, even if it's just the illusion of choice. Again, I'm not saying that the game as it is needs to have more choices, or that it isn't a good game because there aren't many of them; I just have a preference for games, especially VNs, that offer a variety of choices to make, from major decisions to minor ones, from inconsequential choices to ones that have tangible effect on the story as a whole. I believe that more choices and variety thereof would definitely enhance the story, but it's by no means necessary to incorporate more choices for the story to be good.

Regardless of my personal preferences on choices in the narrative, the characters and greater story are, so far, very well written. We've only seen just a little bit of our main trio so far, but each of them already feels like a complex and multifaceted individual; like there's so much more going on beneath the surface that we've yet to see. In just a short amount of time, the story has established our main characters' personalities and foremost character traits, while demonstrating that these observations are only scratching the surface of who these characters are. Seeing those first few cracks in each character's facade of security and self assuredness in the situation - seeing how differently each of them is responding to their present circumstances - does a lot to make them appear three-dimensional and humanize them.

Now, given that the game has only seen its second release so far, anything I've said here is subjective at best and liable to change as the game sees more and more releases. Any and all misgivings or complaints I might have as of this current build, whether I've voiced them or not, could be completely resolved or changed in the game over the next few updates! Only time will tell how the story will unfold and evolve, but if the next few updates continue to impress like these first two builds have, then I'm definitely looking forward to seeing where the story goes! Keep up the good work!

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Pervader is going to be fairly linear, with only a few points where you can alter the narrative (picking your route, and some events near the end). I'm trying to add more flavorful choices in how Reamus reacts to things along the way, but I don't plan on adding anything that significantly alters the course of the story or modifies his character too much.

Just a heads up so you don't expect too much interactivity.

Hey, that's perfectly fine! Make the story you want to make! As I said, I have a personal preference to games that offer lots of interactivity, but that's all it is; I don't think a game needs to have lots of interactivity to be engaging or fun. Pervader has definitely hit the ground running in terms of quality. It's really impressive to think that what's been released so far has been entirely a one man effort! Keep up the good work!

I think this has a lot of potential! I quite enjoyed the writing and the story, with a few moments getting me quite emotional! Jymsar is totally my favorite, he's brooding and cold, yet also compassionate in his own way. The art is lovely as well, and I'm looking forward to more!

Wow I starting to love this! VN!

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Jymsar is without any doubt my favorite, he might be a bit too serious but I find him really cute

The story is super interesting , I really love it

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This update is great

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The art is great but the story could use a little work imo. It's a bit flat. Plus, I do want to have more choices in the future, even if it is a linear novel.


Here's to hoping that it improved because I do believe you have a good premise. 

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I fell the same, the project has a lot of potencial I'm hoping that in the future patchs we have more choices to explore the world and the characters.

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We're going to explore a lot, spatially and character-wise, but there won't be a lot of choices I'm afraid. At least not ones that have any significant impact.

I plan on giving Reamus more options in how he reacts to events, to add a bit of flavor.

But I'm also cautious. I don't want to give players the impression that they have more control over the story than they really have.

For the most part, Pervader is like an illustrated book.

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Loved the new refined sprites for Alen and Jymsar, all the artwork in this game is wonderful! Especially Jymsar's smile! Reamus needs to give him more reasons to smile in the future, can't wait to see what comes next

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ITS OUT YASSSSSSSSS 

Do we have to start over the game?

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No. Are you having some issue loading the game?

No, just wondering if we had to, considering the new update. If it was necessary.

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New update? hell yeah I've been waiting for so long hehe ;3

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Next Update tomorrow?


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Finally the Update Thanks Alot :D
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3 hours from now~

YEEEEEEYYYY!!!

do you by chance have discord server in which fans can support the game?

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There will be a discord link for everyone to join once v0.2.0 launches on June 5th (5 days).

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101% Must Play!!

I was amaze by the artwork and the story line was so exiting aswell cant wait for the next update especially the little watchmen hehe.

ooooohhhh. finally! a vn with magical items and mages ahahahaah this is a very exciting game....  i wonder what kind of adventure is waiting for that big guy wew... the mc is so damn hot! hrrmm... it should be fun if in some part of the ga,e the mc will be separated from the two... and have some fun hahaha . well good luck!! 5 stars for the win!

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Really interesting story, amazing art style, very good looking characters. Pervader has the potential to be one of the best visual novels.

Pervader is turning into my favorite visual novel already, I can't wait to see more.


PS: I'm already in love with Jymsar

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I’m glad you’ve decided to pursue a more linear style of VN. I think a lot of authors get really caught up in the ambitious “player” choice driven story which usually ends up more polarizing rather than personal 😂. There’s a reason great narratives aren’t asking you to try and change a bunch of shit. Good luck bro 

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Thanks. I think you can make interesting stories with lots of choices, but yeah it would be a lot tougher. I spent a lot of time ironing out the plot and realized that if I had to account for too many player choices, then things would quickly spiral out of control.

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The writing and story so far is absolutely marvelous. Looking forward to the updates to come~


-the art as well, something about it is very organic 

<3

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This does have sex scene right?

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Not yet. That will happen much later in the story.

Hey, I really like the flow of the story. Art direction is solid too. I really want to see what happens next so I want to support you. You will be getting another patron this June. 

I like it!! I loved the style and the art, it's really fresh and natural. Keep going!

I was very impressed! It is hard for me to find an interesting plot with good art, good music and attractive main character.  And all this things i have found in Pervander. Music and art (both Characters and Background) are excellent 5/5. Story is intriguing. I really want to see the next chapter. May be when i am released by my credits i will support the project.

The main character is very attractive. Here's hoping we get to see him get nice and intimate in some CGs!

The first chapter has fascinated me a lot, not only because of the characters, the story has developed quite well in this chapter and the plot is incredible, I was hooked from the first minutes, not to mention that the music is wonderful. Excellent work. I look forward to the next chapter.

This first chapter was FANTASTIC! Ah I can't wait to see where this project goes. :) While I love the artwork and the sprites, (also that UI is really clean and very nice) the writing really is the part that shines the most here. In this first episode I already care so much about all of the characters so you're clearly doing something right. 

I look forward to supporting your patreon soon! :) 

ohh! this looks fun... the character.. wow .... this is gonna be a big and popular game soon.. haha keep it up bros

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I'll say this: Pervader has a lot of promise! It's apparent that plenty of thought has went into the premise and narrative. VNs are plentiful, but I can tell this will be one worth waiting for.

Yes, I Agree with you on that :)

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It does take a bit of courage to get this out, but I mean... I'm a proud, out and flaming homosexual, so I'll be fine.


You have my upmost respect. I hope you can work on this project, and never get tired of it, for years to come.

Though I have one question: When you were talking about 3 or more parts, what did you mean by that? I am intrigued (and hopeful...)...

All of us, let's expect Giga will receive the glory, honor and of course support he undoubtedly deserves!

You are programmer, writer and artist united in one person, yes? What to even say, seriously... It doesn't occur to me how it's humanly possible managing everything in only one month. How is keeping your sanity still a thing?

                          ---Warning! silly joke ahead!---

You also deserve a harem (not wanting is totally fine by me and unless you've found someone) of boyfriends who live together with you in a castle, high up in the sky, so you can look down on us mere humans, because you ascended. In the words of OPM: You broke your limiter ...or in the words of 

                                  Undone – FFH Thema


                                          We all want love

                                        We all want honor

                    But nobody wants to pay the asking 

                                                     Price

(except you)

You are inspiring me to work hard on my goals. Thanks a bunch.

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Programmer, me? Nawww... FYI Ren'Py isn't actually that complicated. It's pretty easy to get a project going if you have some ideas and assets. I started learning it about three weeks before launching Pervader. If you really want to be impressed with what you can program in Ren'Py I suggest you check out something like Killigan's Treasure or Minotaur Hotel.

The fact that I managed to work it out by myself should tell you it's easier than you imagine, and should inspire you and everyone else to work on your own projects.

As far the 3 part thing, you will see that there is more to the world of Pervader than what meets the eye. There's a lot I want to do in this space, but that will become more obvious in the future. I'm not going to spoil anything, but I can't wait to see your reactions to some of the stuff I have planned!

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Actually, I want to become a programmer, soon in fact.

Oh? I know both of those. Although, more impressive to me would be something like Robin Morningwood Adventure. Well, I'm not sure, The Minotaur Hotel hasn't been on my radar, yet. However, RMA could've been created with another, more powerful and less known/popular engine.

I guess you are a humble person then? Because you working on that project all alone is an impressive feat no matter what.

And I'll be here waiting~

(Don't take the stuff I wrote above too seriously. But I mean the nice things I said)

The fact that it's linear is significant in it being simple to use :P But yeah, you really don't need to know how to program to use Ren'Py. You need to know some very basic Python for nonlinear VNs, but it's almost nothing as far as knowledge; the difficulty is in planning out the paths and which variables you need where and when, because you could end up needing to either completely rework older code, or repeat the same lines of code over and over again.

I'm glad Alen wasn't used as the father-figure trope that gets killed to inspire the protagonist to go on his journey, but instead is romance route for those with a daddy fetish.

Sorry to be pushy but do u know when you'll be able to make another chapter? Sorry again😅

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June 5th will be the next update

YAY! thank you ❤️❤️

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This is amazing, with only playing the first chapter I can't wait to see what is next :)

btw saddle u should open a discord for this game connects people and its a way to advertise this vn :)

He did, though I am a patron, I don't know if it's only for us or not.

You should check out his patron page. 

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Stay tuned for next update, there will be a Discord link ready for everyone ;)

Ohhh new furry VN game, I love it!!

O ok thanks for letting me know

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